Ok just one part of the book that I htink looks weird is on the top of page 74. It was a flashback about a time when Marjis mothers car broke down, so Marji and her dad had to pick her up. In the first panel, Marji and her father are in the car waiting for her mother. The transition to the next panel stood out at me as if they mistakely drove the car into Marji's mother. After reading the third panel on the page, i realized that I had made a mistake.